I think everything wrote made a lot of sense. But, think on this, suppose you added a little content? I am not saying your information is not good, but what if you added a post title that grabbed people's attention? I mean is a little plain. You ought to look at Yahoo's front page and note how they create news titles to grab people to click. You might add a video or a related pic or two to get readers excited about everything've written. Just my opinion, it would bring your blog a little bit more interesting.
Thank you for sharing this amazing video. Your painting skills are impressive.
Something is wrong with your website, don't you think so? Can you fix it?
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.